It's been a while since I've worked on my own characters, so I thought I would take some time to do some development and maybe start building character sheets.
This is a work in progress sketch of Memory. She is the main character of one of my story concepts, "Manifest Memory". She has the ability to open portals to parallel universes, with a power effect that comes from her hands.
I have attached 3 pics, the original sketch, and two concepts for the effect. I'm still playing with ideas. Any thoughts?



I think it's better to make the eyes a little bit more detailed and bigger
Thanks for the feedback! I am trying to keep closer to realistic proportions, albeit stylized, but you're right, it might not hurt to have her eyes just a bit bigger. I think the size and resolution affected how much detail I put into the eyes, too. Its not exactly a close up, so I didnt spent a lo to time adding detail there. Also, some of the detail will get added or masked in color... it's a bit cliche, but her eyes are going to glow blue, so that would wash out some of the detail anyway.